This is Bethany and Chloe and our short film was called Saviour.
We showcased our film to our class and handed out questionnaires in order to get feedback on what the audience liked, and what could be improved.
From our feedback, we learnt that the biggest positive was how the voiceover conveyed the genre of the film well and that it made the narrative a lot easier to understand.
This was important to us because the emotion of the narrative was what we wanted to be understood by the audience effectively as the main focus of Saviour was for the audience to empathise with the character.
Another thing that we learnt was that our camera shots worked well with the audience, especially the close ups. This is because it showed the characters emotion effectively.
Along with this, the desaturation used was liked by the audience as it showed the mood and genre of the film.
However, the only negative feedback we got was the confusion of the narrative at the end as the audience didn’t know whether the character was alive or dead. This was our intention to have an open ending because that was our twist.
We agreed with these comments as the audience said the most significant points of our short film, and we were aware that the narrative may have some confusion but overall it was understood.
If we could do the project again, we would probably add more scenes to clarify the film and maybe make the ending clearer. Along with this, we could have varied our post production more with the use of more transitions rather than just fade in and fade out.
We believe we targeted our audience correctly as it was targeted at both males and females of ages 16+ and this is what we showed our film too.
Overall, the feedback we got was expected and we are happy with what the audience said.
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